writting prospects

[kaimera]

I'm trying to develop my letters to my prospects. I've tried to put myself in the prospects position and imagined what would catch my attention if I open a letter. Or better yet, answer the question of how would this letter resolve my position.

Please review the following and let me know what you think. Thanks.



ABC REAL ESTATE
P.O. Box 11111
New York, NY 10001

Monday, March 07, 2005

Re: 26 Ball Street
Newark, NJ 07987

Dear Hajjada,

Are you thinking of selling your property but haven’t gotten any favorable response from so-called “prospective buyers”?

I don’t know what your exact situation is but I’ve helped homeowners like yourself:
1. Sell properties that real estate agents have not been able to sell
2. Keep and maintain their good credit ratings
3. Move on with their lives even though their current situations might seem like a continuous and unavoidable burden

These are just some of the things I’ve done for homeowners like you. The unfortunate story is that there are lots of people out there that have chosen foreclosure or bankruptcy as a way out. Others don’t have such an extreme situation but would like to get rid of their property or are simply having a hard time keeping up with the payments.

I can help you. I’m aggressively expanding into the Newark area with a list of options that I’ve used in other cities to help resolve financial or real-estate issues.

Please call me (917-201-5977 - Cell) at your earliest convenience so we can quickly establish a plan to resolve your situation.

Thank you for your time.




- Kaimera Silicon
Cell: 917-201-5977

[kaimera]

here's another that i've written and want to agressively buy the property. These are properties that I know the owners will be willing to sell cause of their or the properties condition.

ABC REAL ESTATE
P.O. Box 11111
New York, NY 10001

Monday, March 07, 2005

Re: 26 Ball Street
Newark, NJ 07987

Dear Hajjada,

I am interested in purchasing your property at the above address. Please contact me as soon as you can on my cell phone 917-201-5977. I’m willing to work with you if you are willing to sell your property as soon as possible.

Thank you for your time.



Kaimera Silicon
Cell: 917-201-5977

[OKRICHLAND]

Hello Kaimera,
OKRICHLAND here.
Has this letter worked for you on a volume scale?,
If so do you mind if I use it?

[kaimera]

Hello Kaimera,
OKRICHLAND here.
Has this letter worked for you on a volume scale?,
If so do you mind if I use it?

Not a problem as long as you include "another kaimera productions" :praise: :lol:.
Just joking its totally okay. Please feel free but do let me know what you think about it first. I just wrote it but would like to know what everyone thinks.

this is the great thing about an open community like this. We are here to help each other.

[OKRICHLAND]

Not a problem as long as you include "another kaimera productions" :praise: :lol:.
Just joking its totally okay. Please feel free but do let me know what you think about it first. I just wrote it but would like to know what everyone thinks.

this is the great thing about an open community like this. We are here to help each other.
You got it sister
and the letter sounds OK to me....
Dave R.